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Lost
Oct 14, 2009 12:47:01 GMT -6
Post by akitaa on Oct 14, 2009 12:47:01 GMT -6
Questions fill my mind, Tears fill my eyes. I push myself to find The answers with unsuccessful tries.
What stands in my way? Why does this madness not conclude? I go around in circles night and day, But me the answer still eludes.
Others stand tall While I shrink to the floor. I am smashed against the wall And cannot find the door.
Crumpled on the ground, I cry and cover my face. Will I ever be unbound, Free from this suffocating place?
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Sarah
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Lost
Dec 5, 2009 3:22:33 GMT -6
Post by Sarah on Dec 5, 2009 3:22:33 GMT -6
Questions fill my mind, Tears fill my eyes. I push myself to find The answers with unsuccessful tries. What stands in my way? Why does this madness not conclude? I go around in circles night and day, But me the answer still eludes. Others stand tall While I shrink to the floor. I am smashed against the wall And cannot find the door. Crumpled on the ground, I cry and cover my face. Will I ever be unbound, Free from this suffocating place? This is beautiful. The imagery pops out and hits you in the face. The last eight lines of this poem I feel are the most meaningful. It seems as if the person in the poem feels like their world is falling apart and there is no where to go. I think this poem is easy to relate to. I look forward to more poems!
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